Fic question

[whiskyinmind]

(still working on the layout btw - it's not complete yet)

I have lots of scenarios and ficlets in my head (and in my many fic notebooks as well) but each one of them feels to me like a stand alone which I want to extend into a longer story.

And therein lies my problem. And is an explanation for why I have so many WIPs (which bug me as much as they do anyone who's reading them).

I get a scenario in my head, I write it, then my brain wants me to write more of it and show how the characters and situations developed - for example, I have a Dean/Faith ficlet I'm working on right now, but the scenario as I'm writing it is of an established... well, not 'relationship' in the traditional sense of the word, but they've met and interacted before the thing I'm writing happens.

It's short, it's punchy, it kinda works, but I want to show how they met, I want to show their history, and potentially their future.

Same with another fic I have on the go - a Bela centric short one-piece. (Wench, this is the one you've seen the first few paragraphs of.) Because of its nature it needs to be short and punchy, but when the reveal is made I want to explore it more but that will destroy the impact.

So here, finally, is the question.

Should I trust myself and my readers (you guys) to be able to see the world I've built in my head, or do I expand the stories and show that world?

I have a feeling I know the answer, so a secondary question is this: how do I stop myself from losing the impact?

I'm flaily. I may be getting used to this not getting out of bed until after the time I used to have been at work for an hour...

Comments

[tessarin.livejournal.com]

Well you could always try something like the using each standalone as a window in time. You can then choose to go either forward or back from there thus missing out a lot of the background setting. I mean JW is doing basically this in S8.

I would tend to complete the fics as you envisioned them and put the other ideas into a sequel. Otherwise you end up with an epic. Not that that's a bad thing but of course it would mean putting other things on the back burner.

The only issue with this is prequilitus whether readers will read something set before the end you have already written , whether the drama is gone, the only thing here is the time gap. If it is long enough you have enough wriggle room. Seen this done a number of times like Nemo's partners series & Bastard snows Coffee series, the thing to remember here is later readers will start at the beginning.

Or you could cheat like I am and try both.

[wenchpixie]

We've spoken about this before, but basically yes. I can only go on what I write (and to a lesser extent on what I read) but as the queen of fic that comes in at about 1,500 words and who gets flaily at over 3,000 that's what I write all the time.

Yes, it's easier if you stick entirely to canon yadda yadda blah, but when you're using characters that people already know you've got an established way of behaving/reacting that will just be accepted - and if they behave differently for reasons in their AU backstory then you've also got an inbuilt shorthand there.

If you want to go back and explain - to 'verse it - then you're free to do that, but with the fics you're talking about that I know anything about you'd be perfectly fine just leaving them too; they don't need further explanation to make them work (and yes, I know I've whined about someone asking for sequels, but I've really only had one person whining to me about it and I've never had anyone tell me they felt cheated by there not being any).

I think the easiest way to avoid WiPs is to make sure every "chapter" can finish right there; not cliff hang it but end it on either a punchy note or a concuding one (or both, possibly), and to trust your readers - even if they don't get exactly what you intended, which is possible with shorter fic because they're slightly like poetry in the way readers interpret them sometimes, then that's not wrong, just open.

EDT: Also? Sleep=awesome :)

[iyalode.livejournal.com]

Dude, I hear you. Welcome to my world. Except you actually finish things. I on the other hand, have starts, endings and in-between shit floating round like space junk! Seriously, I have the attention span of a freakin' gnat.

Hi! by the way. Have been awol. Owe you comments all over the place *hugs*

[booster17.livejournal.com]

You're doing much better than me. I have a couple of 'verses in my head that would connect up several different storys/scenes that I have floating around also in my head, but I just seem to be blocked on the actual writing of them down or even starting the first part.

*sigh* Meanwhile, occasional crack!fic does flow.... I despair at times.

[velvetwhip.livejournal.com]

It depends. If you draw the relationship well enough (which you have more than the talent to do), then I think people can pick up on what went before.


Gabrielle