22 May 2008 @ 11:35 am
Disconnected  
days of fake smiles and lies
inside the child weeps
someone knows, someone cares
childish hopes turn to fear
older now, the truth comes out
no one knows
no one cares
eternities spin, collide. Never converge
chills the bones, freezes the blood
tonight, the promise of peace
ending the lie
dawn comes with fake lies and smiles
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[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/amy_star_/ on May 23rd, 2008 09:43 am (UTC)
this is one of the best poems i've read in a long time. look, you made me lose my caps, even. :)
[identity profile] whiskyinmind.livejournal.com on May 23rd, 2008 09:48 am (UTC)
*blushes*

I'm glad you like it!